This poem doesn't have much originality to it at all, and there's nothing very noteworthy about the wording of it either. It's honest and heartfelt, but that's about all I can say to it's defense. For a poem like this, try looking for different ways to say things rather than just flat out saying them.
awww this is so sad/sweet/I totally know what you meant, it's sad when one person seems so uneffected and you find yourself being torn up over something that seems to mean nothing to the other person. you worded this really well and although it wasn't the most poetic thing I've ever read, it was very honest and very realistic and thats what made me really love this write, I honestly wouldn't change anything except maybe clean up some of the wording so it sounds just a bit more original, other then that great write, ~jess