It's the "lust for power," you added an S. Other than that, I think it's fairly good. It could flow better, but that'll come eventually--it always does. One thing, though--is this really political? If you look at it a certain way, you could actually see it as an allegory for a bad relationship. --crimson echo
wow such a wise young lady.........great annalogy and metaphor!......it skips a bit in rythm but over all a great story, well done good lady!.......*turns to young p* ey man its a story enjoy it! dont spycho-annalyze such a thing, its main purpose obviously is something to apply to your own life *hands him a bag of pop-corn* a'ight man now jus lean back in yer lazy boy and watch the magick unfold lol.......all in fun -ropedpoet
i was confused by this one. i understood the concept but i can't think of a person in history that u are talking about. is this about Bush? my brother read this and he said that u pretty much described the life of Alexander the Great.