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    dots Submission Name: It's That Easydots
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    Author: disturbed420
    ASL Info:    20/f/wpg
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 36/35/15
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Haiku/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 603
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    Bytes: 88



    Description:
       Just something that popped into my head tonight... (August 15th, 2006)


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    dotsIt's That Easydots
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    My heart starts off whole.
    You tell me I mean nothing.
    My heart is broken.




    Submitted on 2006-08-16 01:59:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It was simple, too the point, and I think that a lot of people will be able to relate to those three short, simple, but meaningful lines typed out on the page. I think I'm going to go check out some more of your work and see how it compares. Good job and Keep Writing.
    ~Caotic~
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
      This tells you what you're writng about right away. It has a lot of meaning for just three lines.

    I guess it's when you give somebody your heart, you trust them with it, but then they rip it in two. Really sux... And I think you're saying, you can never put it back, because it's so hard to get it out of your head. Even when you think it is, it's always back there somewhere.

    ~*~ Lisa ~*~
    | Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by Nani | [ Reply to This ]


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