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    dots Submission Name: Alluredots
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    Author: SDG
    ASL Info:    35
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 11/19/11
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAlluredots
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    Would it be easier to give it away?
    Light brightens boldly
    Spells are broken coldly
    Itís daybreak carving through a ravine
    Itís a gentle breeze on a broken stream

    And there are children with nothing to do
    Up the stairs is nothing new.

    I stirred my pots.
    I wondered about the silenceÖ

    On the count of three we will lift you up.




    Submitted on 2006-08-16 02:57:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yay! a random type poem! i like ones with no direct meaning, or a hidden 1. is cool, reminds me of a witch stirring a couldren, about to lift a child up and over the brim of the pot....[insert manical laugh here]

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    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by ellesmera | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. I am not sure exactly what it means but it's original and brings interesting images to mind. not every poem must necessarily mean something specific. sometimes it's good to leave the impression open. nice write.
    | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]


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