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    dots Submission Name: Eyes Forget to Seedots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEyes Forget to Seedots
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    I walk around and know nothing.
    I'm only testing my mind.
    It's great to discover
    that you're still alive.
    It's great to feel your senses return.
    Dreaming makes you forget
    that silence is the best music
    and that eyes sometimes forget to see.




    Submitted on 2004-01-26 11:00:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Geez this is so much something I can relate to.

    It almost gave me the sense that I was stratching my back and arms to wake up. I like that.

    I like your work.
    Always, thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2011-09-15 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm always thrilled to see something new from you!
    | Posted on 2004-01-26 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      Coming out of a bad relationship, by any chance? GOOD WORK AGAIN! <><
    | Posted on 2004-01-26 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]


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