Freak
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My friend Laura thinks, because she dresses in black that she is a freak...or "goth" Well...I don't agree with that....
So here you go Laura...I dedicate this poem to you.
So here you go Laura...I dedicate this poem to you.
Freak
In your eyes no one knows all the truth you expose All our masks stick like glue they hide the facts that frighten you Don't speak your words aren't real I'm the freak you're the pill Swallow it down don't be scared I'll never drown but you never cared Move my mouth Incapable In the crowd Unspeakable Don't blend in try and stick out Don't give in stand and be proud These are things I've been taught Always your dreams I've been caught Never perfect try to be Never worth it never me All the screams Deafening silence All my dreams Inside violence In my head the voices speak of things I dread I'm the freak! |
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| Dude, I loved this! It reminds me of one of my poems...Bury It Deep...Anyways, This was excellent:) This part I liked and didn't like at the same time "I'm the freak you're the pill" It sounds great, but it doens't fit the poem i don't think. It's like this person has never given a [censored], yet their the pill that makes you "normal". Lia | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ] | Dude, I loved this! It reminds me of one of my poems...Bury It Deep...Anyways, This was excellent:) | This part I liked and didn't like at the same time "I'm the freak you're the pill" It sounds great, but it doens't fit the poem i don't think. It's like this person has never given a [censored], yet their the pill that makes you "normal". Lia | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ] | Dude, I loved this! It reminds me of one of my poems...Bury It Deep...Anyways, This was excellent:) | This part I liked and didn't like at the same time "I'm the freak you're the pill" It sounds great, but it doens't fit the poem i don't think. It's like this person has never given a [censored], yet their the pill that makes you "normal". Lia | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ] | Dude, I loved this! It reminds me of one of my poems...Bury It Deep...Anyways, This was excellent:) | This part I liked and didn't like at the same time "I'm the freak you're the pill" It sounds great, but it doens't fit the poem i don't think. It's like this person has never given a [censored], yet their the pill that makes you "normal". Lia | Posted on 2006-08-16 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ] | this line | "All our masks stick like glue they hide the facts that frighten you" It said that maybe in your eyes, no one is themselves. It seems like they are always constantly not being truthful either with themselves or with others. Its very well written and a beautiful piece. ~LocketzVc | Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by LocketzVC | [ Reply to This ] | |
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