Stolen Kisses

Author: MyKemicalfailur Elite Ratio:    4.15 - 267 /123 /15 Words: 71

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Stolen Kisses

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Dreaming of those Stolen kisses She can't help but Hide from this thing That time can not erase Thinking of those Stolen kisses She can't help but Shrink inside of Who she once was Wishing for those Stolen kisses To leave her thoughts She can't help but Push everything out Waiting for those Stolen kisses To be fixed She can't help but Die inside

Submitted on 2006-08-16 21:59:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I like it. I know exactly what you're thinking here. I hate that I know this. But I do. Wishing for those Stolen kisses To leave her thoughts She can't help but Push everything out My grandmother is in ICU, possibly dying, and all I can think of is having just a moment alone with a certain someone that I shouldn't even see, due to the fact that he left me over a year and a half ago for someone else. But he and I are odd, and can't leave each other alone. And I keep hoping for this moment, and a chance to steal one of those self-destructive kisses. So, I love this. Great job.

| Posted on 2006-08-18 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]

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