Swathed in Darkness
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Swathed in Darkness
My everlasting sorrow seems so close to its peak It reflects the words of terror that I cannot speak Although I seldom feel close to happiness' grasp I lose all my joy in disappointment’s clasp My actions, propelled by regret, I cannot explain They could have been spoken, yet only in vain Whilst I lay dying, my wounds washed up by the rain My heart feels tied up as in a chain My bleary tears no longer seem to affect you now As you suddenly lost all trust in our vow You think I swagger as if seeking attention Thinking I'm nothing but an act of pretension I now invoke your precious being I prey whilst you laugh without forgiveness You've punctured my heart by barely seeing How my seraph's swathed in darkness Now that I need you the most, I’ve lost it all |
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| "Now that i need you most, i've lost it all" Bam. That ending right there. I've been through that so many times recently. Especially with losing a best friend of 11 years. Just when I needed them more then ever, they disappeared, and I realized too late they were never there to begin with. BCute<3 | Posted on 2006-08-17 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ] | I love it, I really do. You did a great play on words during the whole thing, I felt my little black heart getting tuged at, haha. The only thing you might want to change in it is, | "How my seraph's swathed in darkness." I think you can replace it with something better then that, something that cleans and seals the poem, but I can't really think of something that would. Great job again, hope to see more by you! | Posted on 2006-08-17 00:00:00 | by Shadow_Mirror | [ Reply to This ] | |
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