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    dots Submission Name: Chasing Cloudsdots
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    Author: HaldirLives
    Elite Ratio:    5.12 - 234/149/60
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 333
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    Description:
       The title came to me while I was riding up to NYC this weekend, and I let it go from there.


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    dotsChasing Cloudsdots
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    In the end,
    On a highway,
    We all chase clouds.
    Their cotton candy shaping
    To our unconscious desires.
    Watch them, chase them,
    Learn.




    Submitted on 2006-08-17 09:55:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love this! It is so short, so simple, yet so deep....oooh, I sound like a fan, no? Maybe I will be. I like this one so much, I will fave it. Althought, I would simply love to give you an extended review, there really is nothing to say about this poem except for an opinion of it.

    watch them. Chase them. Learn.... I love it. Plus if that didn't come out in Italics I will feel really stupid... so I will say this. I will go and review some of your stuff later, cuz Im really tired now. Good-o!

    ~Maevity
    | Posted on 2006-08-17 00:00:00 | by Maevity | [ Reply to This ]



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