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    dots Submission Name: Meditation on Creationdots
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    Author: isselman2001
    Elite Ratio:    5.38 - 37/47/46
    Words: 21
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMeditation on Creationdots
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    There was a time when life was good to eat,
    leaves fell on your feet
    and pies were wonderful and sweet.




    Submitted on 2006-08-17 13:21:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmm. I thought that there was going to be more to this! It would be considered a deep thought (by me, at least) if it didn't rhyme, but it rhymes. I don't quite know what to make of it. I wonder if maybe you made it the end or intro to a poem...?
    | Posted on 2006-08-17 00:00:00 | by Maevity | [ Reply to This ]


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