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    dots Submission Name: reckoning in oregondots
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    Author: diamond_dave
    ASL Info:    33, m. belieze city
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       i was going through some realy difficult stuff with this one guy that like i dont even know. i was angry, so i wrote this. then i felt better.


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    dotsreckoning in oregondots
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    guess what im all most at your house.
    im not laughing.
    see you in about 3 hours its a red eyed flight.
    cant wait to see you.
    hhhhaaahhhahhaaa not laughing

    its a shame.that's a bloody shame.
    hhhhaaahhha im no game.
    you might have.
    this I can laugh hhhhohhaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh




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