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Submission Name:
Blissful Beauty
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Author:
xmichellex
ASL Info:
16/f/Canada
Elite Ratio:
4.63 - 5/6/9
Words:
70
Class/Type:
Poetry/Gothic
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Blissful Beauty
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Oh resplendent blissful beauty
As I admire your impudent grace
I am a slave to your senseless hypocrisy
And a prisoner to your warm embrace
How such pure gorgeousness
Could end up being so evil
And how such selfishness
Could become a sin so brutal
Behind your innocent aesthetic face
Lay the most unholy lies
A beautiful young madden in disgrace
Is a vicious trap in disguise
Submitted on 2006-08-17 22:26:13
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A lot of your poems truely do have a religious theme. I'll have to get the word out about your peoms. I know a few people on here that will drink them right up! If they listen to the poor old ramblings of BCute that is. Who knows.
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