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    dots Submission Name: Lifeís pretty gooddots

    Author: Mykquillion
    ASL Info:    20/M/NEB
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 109/124/41
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Happy
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    dotsLifeís pretty gooddots

    Iím always looking,
    Never finding, always sad;
    I need to think less.

    Submitted on 2006-08-18 08:36:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

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      Wow, yet again perfect. :)
    Geez, all the days I go through like that.
    I never thought of thinking less...I guess that would help out alot. huh? haha
    | Posted on 2006-11-13 00:00:00 | by dreamer37517 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hehehe, this is exactly how I feel sometimes. Always looking, never finding, always sad. Its sad that you feel that way too. But, hey. Let's together stop thinking and just get on with being happy! Tee-hee!

    Hey all, I'm just trying to get my reciprocation up. I'm down in the -'s pretty far. So, don't feel the need to comment on my work. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things at Elite. Think of it as a favor from me to you! Thanks for the read!
    | Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      This is kind of what my old teacher used to say to me. Life can be good or bad. If you think it's gonna be good, then it'll be good, and if you think it's gonna be bad....well you get my point. Now, I can relate to this. You know, always thinking, and never stopping to enjoy things. Life is good, but if you are always searching for something, you will never find out how good it can be.

    I'm guessing this isn't how you really feel though. That this is you seeing through someone elses eyes again. But, I did say I was just guessing. I don't really know.

    Great haiku and keep on writing.

    | Posted on 2006-08-18 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]

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