This was a very small item. It gave me no direction to think about. It also had no rhyme and was a little bit short on words.
You should try to limit/make your poetry into stanzas. The stanzas can be/ should be four lines in length. This is the normal stanza length.
This item made me feel as if there was no subject. I also don't know anything about your poetry writing in the past. Have all of your poems been this length? Please refer me to a poem of yours that has more length to it.
US Glen obviously has no idea what a haiku is. The beauty of this is the simplicity. You seem to have a talent for this style of poetry. It is very seldom that I am moved by a haiku, or even visualize anything. This has done both. Nice write.