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    dots Submission Name: Spontaneousdots

    Author: Mykquillion
    ASL Info:    20/M/NEB
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 109/124/41
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nature
    Total Views: 891
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 92


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    Go without a map.
    I donít know what is ahead,
    Nor does that phase me.

    Submitted on 2006-08-18 08:45:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love the spirit of this haiku; and I think that the title is perfectly matched to the poem itself.

    Nicely done!
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      I love how you manage to say so much with so few words. Everyone can relate to universal subject matter.
    | Posted on 2007-01-29 00:00:00 | by Endless River | [ Reply to This ]
      I love your work so far. It leaves the reader thinking long after the words are done. You are able to convey such thoughts in so few words. I truly admire you for that.

    Hey all, I'm just trying to get my reciprocation up. I'm down in the -'s pretty far. So, don't feel the need to comment on my work. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things at Elite. Think of it as a favor from me to you! Thanks for the read!

    | Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this. It's always good to just take a chance once in a while. No planning, no packing, nothing. That's what I'd really like to do.

    | Posted on 2006-08-18 00:00:00 | by PiperH | [ Reply to This ]
      Lovely. Minimalism is a style not used enough. So much can be taken from so litely and its nice. I like the idea of just going with no map, no plans. It's almost a form of therapy. I had made a habit of it when I started driving, but with the rising fuel prices...it became a very expensive habit.
    | Posted on 2006-08-21 00:00:00 | by LadyChaos | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL LOVE IT< BRAVO<A HIT POEM! I like it it is funny. Keep it up u might be a pholosepher one day (however it's spelled) anyways peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2006-08-18 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]

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