At first I was like "Who is Emus?" LOL@myself. I think you've done well in the first three lines. I don't know about the line incurable sadness. Maybe you could rephrase. Just a thought. I hope I don't upset you.
I love this, you know, I love all the little short poems you write, I could use them all as quotes to live by. You have some amazing thoughts And the best thing they are true, and they dwell in one's mind like sugar plums when they sleep. I love this! Excellent job!
Blunt, and bludgeoned. Liked it. Leaves me feeling a little helpless being subjected as a hapless emu. Maybe it's because I see myself as a mountain goat? Or maybe for the fact my wings were clipped long ago, and defying nature they've grown back. Always liked your work cuddledumplin, you have a knack for playing upon different topics and feelings, leaving people guessing on what direction you might take next.
very cute and good. Not my favorite, but you really do have a talent for stating profound ideas without saying much, especially with your womderful analogies... I love emus... =^..^= it's so random, I love it. This could be any bird, really, but by making it an exotic, less-known bird it has a lot more emphasis. Great job, I was wondering where you'd got to =^..^= luv your new av ~Coranna