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    dots Submission Name: Drunken Freestyledots
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    Author: SinCeer05
    ASL Info:    21mVA
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 243/279/168
    Words: 1
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 486
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 0



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    dotsDrunken Freestyledots
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    Submitted on 2006-08-20 02:55:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love it
    It's perfect.
    It shames all my drunken freestyles
    | Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by Mr_Eff | [ Reply to This ]
      its the best poem ive ever read!!!!

    it shows all the perfect things on a single page....
    | Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by ellesmera | [ Reply to This ]
      you couldnt have said it better :)
    | Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by Sera Rojas | [ Reply to This ]
      you realize that there is a delete button on Eliteskills, so you don't have to keep taking needless comments like this one.
    Wishing for more
    ~Brian
    | Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by Imadjinn | [ Reply to This ]
      what an azz. i expected to read some ridiculous azz rhymes and i guess u just passed out at the [censored] comp.
    | Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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