Description: Okay I wrote this poem about two years ago. It's either about friendship or something more, take your pick. I think I may rewrite it...hmm...
You Can Trust In Me -------------------------------------------
When you are in doubt
And have nowhere to go
You can turn to me
And I'll be there for you.
If you have tears to shed
Or screams to unleash
Don't hesitate to call
I'll be there in a heartbeat.
You can trust in me.
We may not always be together,
Even if we are world's apart
I'll be there for you.
Just tell me your problems
I'll try my best to chase them all away
With me you will always be safe
No danger will; only go.
No hesitation for you
You can trust in me.
aww i loved this it reminds me of what i kept trying and trying to tell my ex but he was hardheaded anyway its a great write and has a very good flow keep up the good work
very good write, but one part didn't sound right. that line that say: "No danger will; only go" it doesn't make sense to me. maybe you could clear that up. but other than that, great job. keep writing... </3 lisa
i agree, there is no need to re-write this. (but do so if you think you should). i like it as it is. i get the feelin of wanting to embrace someone and protect them from the world. its a nice thought. whirl**
Submission Name: You Can Trust In Me
