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    dots Submission Name: Mentally Chalenged or I Just Don't Get Itdots
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    Author: nsc
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 53/37/14
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMentally Chalenged or I Just Don't Get Itdots
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    Explain to me so I'll understand
    How a creator of a universe needs a helping Hand, to kill so many people?

    I mean, wouldn't it save a whole lot of time
    If there where a bunch of guys he didn't like,
    Just to smack 'em down in broad daylight and We'd all get the message?

    Explain to me so I'll understand
    How a creator of a universe needs worship And praise from those that kill women and Children in roadside cafes?

    Think about this.
    God can create a UNIVERSE!
    Let me repeat.
    God can create a UNIVERSE, stars, planets, Galaxies, life, infinite space!
    And God needs Some freaking idiot to blow up the place?

    Explain to me so I'll understand.
    I just don't get it.






    Submitted on 2006-08-20 16:20:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can't explain to you so you can understand. If I did, others would do so as well, and you would get so many differnt responses and opinion and all of them will clash and you'll get to the point where you'll be like 'Fvck it! I don't even care anymore!'. But, I can tell you one thing; I do see where you're coming from. I don't and probably never will get the need for worship and praise. Yeah, sure it's great to be recognized for your work and the things you've done, but that's a human trait, and supposedly, "god" is a divine being, therefore, above us and unable to succumb to our needs and traits....
    Just a thought...
    Ok, as for oyur write itself...I would consider looking over it for mistakes and errors, for I did find a few, I would point them out, but I've been doing this all day and don't feel like spoon-feeding anymore, lol, but just trust that there are at least a few mistakes in here.
    Other than that, pretty sweet write, almost an-in-your-face kind of questioning. I like that. bYe for now thaough...

    *tox*
    | Posted on 2006-08-20 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]



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