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    dots Submission Name: de nadadots
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    Author: Sera Rojas
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 5/5/8
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       de nada ....just a few little nightmares thas all


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    dotsde nadadots
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    waiting for the kaos
    we dont stop at the drop hat so SWITCH
    im gonna watch your tactics
    rearrange ..change the game
    oh my
    go with it
    you got the Cuban Links right here
    cum with it baby
    and am i being HARD?
    shit.im sorry. call me back later
    cuz you know im back
    from the seventh circle of hell (or did i go farther than THAT white boy?
    you jus keep on tellin me all those
    STORIES)
    keep me from distracted and acting up
    (sheets still sweaty and yeah boyyy
    still up for the 12th night )
    and im still ...
    here laughing at you in spanish
    little whispers though i still feel sick
    and just hold up
    til its all said and done the clinic the lines
    the waiting for HIM to arrive
    shhh just wait a minute cuz im still
    HAUNTED
    (only when the minutes drag)




    Submitted on 2006-08-20 19:16:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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