First, here's a big hug. This poem does make someone want to give you a hug. I am always amazed by your talent of using so few words, yet all your work speaks voluminously. I can say from reading all your poems, you do truly know how to express yourself and love someone, even if at a distance.
Love without touch is frustrating, though when the time of skin to skin happen, it makes far more complicated. I fthat isn't insane enough life throws your personal spirituality in the mixs of it all.
I like the simplicity, and to clearly get your point across in so few words is a talent in itself. I can relate to this poem because I'm trying to let go of someone who never even knew I cared. I see him every day and I keep expecting these feelings to pass, but he never walks in any less beautiful so at some point in the day, I just give up. But enough about me. This is a unique piece that obviously brings out the feelings I'm having because of my situation. You've made excellent word choices, it is original and I wouldn't change a thing.