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    dots Submission Name: Resignationdots

    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       The feeling that something you've never really had is over and you're somewhat sad but more relieved...

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    accepting the
    stillness of
    my loss
    it dawns
    on me in
    fearless disarray
    I've escaped
    a fate of
    and momentary

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      It seems that you saved yourself from a choice that wasn't best for you in the first place. And it's a sign of wisdom and intuition to know the difference.

    I've made those choices too. How much suffering should we allow ourselves is the question. And if we know the ending,
    why would we allow it for ourselves?

    You're so good at this minimalist style. and it's good to see your work. I'll be back later on!

    | Posted on 2008-02-08 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      First, here's a big hug. This poem does make someone want to give you a hug. I am always amazed by your talent of using so few words, yet all your work speaks voluminously. I can say from reading all your poems, you do truly know how to express yourself and love someone, even if at a distance.

    Love without touch is frustrating, though when the time of skin to skin happen, it makes far more complicated. I fthat isn't insane enough life throws your personal spirituality in the mixs of it all.
    | Posted on 2006-10-27 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      The sweet realization to help you off that rebound of quiting your job/ giving up on a responsibility. Just a lovely feeling isn't it? Too bad it's so short....

    Great poem, love the simplicity and dry cutness.

    | Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by Outlaw | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the simplicity, and to clearly get your point across in so few words is a talent in itself. I can relate to this poem because I'm trying to let go of someone who never even knew I cared. I see him every day and I keep expecting these feelings to pass, but he never walks in any less beautiful so at some point in the day, I just give up. But enough about me. This is a unique piece that obviously brings out the feelings I'm having because of my situation. You've made excellent word choices, it is original and I wouldn't change a thing.
    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by Lisa Milligan | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi again.

    I interpreted this as being about a lost love. You always thought something could be there, but he cuts you down.

    I've escaped
    a fate of
    and momentary

    It's better to have that pain now than to be in a relationship with someone who never really loved you for years. (Sorry for the tangent, but that happened to a friend of mine, and it would kill me).

    I hope life is treating you well,
    | Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]

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