is this what you always wanted me to be?
This has gotta be what its all about.
Thumb holes in my shirt.
| Preety clear that this is about cutting. You know cutting is not healthy and you're acting out on something much more deep and painful.||| Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by Lonesomeghost | [ Reply to This ] || Well..If you don't cut, then why write this piece? Are you trying to look through the eyes of others? Because if so..its not a bad piece..a little cliché, and emotional crap..But its good..I use to cut, long sleeves are still nice..scars don't exactly disappear..ya know? But anyways, if you're thinking about cutting, I have a word of advice.."Don't"..It just sucks, and its an addiction..But anyways, nice piece..short and straight to the point..Good job..|
|| Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by rainbowXrazors | [ Reply to This ] || Hah. Awesome. Completely awesome. It was sad. I got this image of me this past year at college. Hiding. Fading into the walls. Trying to hide from everyone. Especially. him. Anyways. Very good write! Very heartfelt and emotional!|
|| Posted on 2006-08-28 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ] || *Sits a few moments, gathering his thoughts*|
First and foremost, very well written and expressive. Having experience much of this firstand, I can certainly relate. Broken flesh, rusted blades, escape of pain with bloodloss, all too familiar. An obsession, an addiction, perferrated pleasure. I love this piece, start to finish. On another note, I find it rediculously profund how you have managed to express so much in so few words, I cannot seem to keep any of my piece below 200 words. *frowns*
Anyway, I am rambling now.
Overall, a great job, keep up the excellent work.
|| Posted on 2006-09-04 00:00:00 | by The Forsaken | [ Reply to This ] |