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    dots Submission Name: I'm Gonna die youngdots
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    Author: BenCollier
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 425/386/88
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 968
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 934



    Description:
       Perhaps a country song? Anyone out there know a band that wants to buy it? Or if it sucks.... never mind.


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    dotsI'm Gonna die youngdots
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    I spent too much on a doctor bill
    Sittin in her office, got news that wouldn't thrill
    Even the strongest person of heart and soul
    Would take this news and their blood would run cold

    CHORUS:
    I'm gonna die young
    Cause I lead a bad life
    I'm gonna die young
    I know it'll upset my wife

    BRIDGE:
    I eat too much
    And smoke all day
    For a healthy lifestyle
    Thats not the way
    Don't wanna do what people say
    Good for you foods taste like hay

    I grew up eating anything I want
    Fried foods and sweets in any fancy restaurant
    Started smoking when I was a young teen
    Quit a few times and did drugs in between

    CHORUS:
    I'm gonna die young
    It'll be a short life
    I'm gonna die young
    Because of all the strife




    Submitted on 2006-08-21 18:46:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That is a country song. I read it and then read it backwards and I felt young again. Yup, if you read it backwards, you'll get your health back and you and your wife will be happy. Like that Bob guy on the Enzyte commercials!

    This was chillingly frightening and funny at the same time...but thats probably cuz I'm gettin old too.

    | Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this was good and if the corus was sung twice though It would make a soog song, well it may just have to be sung once, but the tune I was going with it sounded good twice. But resally overall, it isn;t all that bad for a song!
    | Posted on 2006-08-21 00:00:00 | by samyalone | [ Reply to This ]


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