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I'm Gonna die young

Author: BenCollier
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Class/Type: Lyrics /Serious
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Perhaps a country song? Anyone out there know a band that wants to buy it? Or if it sucks.... never mind.

I'm Gonna die young

I spent too much on a doctor bill
Sittin in her office, got news that wouldn't thrill
Even the strongest person of heart and soul
Would take this news and their blood would run cold

I'm gonna die young
Cause I lead a bad life
I'm gonna die young
I know it'll upset my wife

I eat too much
And smoke all day
For a healthy lifestyle
Thats not the way
Don't wanna do what people say
Good for you foods taste like hay

I grew up eating anything I want
Fried foods and sweets in any fancy restaurant
Started smoking when I was a young teen
Quit a few times and did drugs in between

I'm gonna die young
It'll be a short life
I'm gonna die young
Because of all the strife

Submitted on 2006-08-21 18:46:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That is a country song. I read it and then read it backwards and I felt young again. Yup, if you read it backwards, you'll get your health back and you and your wife will be happy. Like that Bob guy on the Enzyte commercials!

This was chillingly frightening and funny at the same time...but thats probably cuz I'm gettin old too.

| Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
  I thought this was good and if the corus was sung twice though It would make a soog song, well it may just have to be sung once, but the tune I was going with it sounded good twice. But resally overall, it isn;t all that bad for a song!
| Posted on 2006-08-21 00:00:00 | by samyalone | [ Reply to This ]

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