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    dots Submission Name: Care to Caredots
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    Author: RequiemOfDreams
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 97/140/38
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    dotsCare to Caredots
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    A crescent moon fills the sky
    And all the demon's children run ary
    Scurrying around trying to find favor
    Following the orders of their supposed savior
    A fairy begins to tell a tale
    Of how a story was doomed to fail

    A man of a golden halo instructs the world
    To listen to him or they will be hurled
    Tossed deep into wicked doom
    Swept aside by a sharp clawed broom
    The fairy teller began a pause
    Then told a story of Santa Claus
    A cheerful man who ate all day
    With a caring smile letting off a harmful ray

    The begger cared, the hobo cared
    With deep eyes that never faired
    But people pass them by each day
    Letting off their own harmful ray
    And to each his own, hurray
    Each care to his own, hurray?




    Submitted on 2006-08-22 03:39:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a well written piece that gives the reader a chance to bend it to their own liking. I think the part I liked the best was the middle; I took it as most people believe in things on blind faith. To me Santa and Christ (assuming the halo reference) come close to the same. Both idolized for their "morals" and "beliefs", both want you to be good or there is a consequence to be had. people put a lot into faith for the goodness of their own well being, but when it comes to the salvation of others or lending a helping hand, unless it benefits them is some way, most people look away at the dregs of society; almost like Santa and Christ won't mind if I pass them by, someone else will help them. Could be way off, but that's what I got out of it. Thanks for the submission!!!
    | Posted on 2010-01-26 00:00:00 | by Nicholas Lala | [ Reply to This ]


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