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    dots Submission Name: Everything I Have Gone Throughdots
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    Author: RequiemOfDreams
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 97/140/38
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsEverything I Have Gone Throughdots
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    I've wrote of paths
    Spoken of roads
    Imagined forks
    Envisioned truths
    Realized falicies
    Invoked feelings
    Revoked happiness
    Learnt deadends
    And through it all I thought about what I would say
    After counting on destiny to bring me all the way
    And for all the distance I have travelled
    I have but a single idea, I have unravelled

    Fuck the po-leece




    Submitted on 2006-08-22 03:57:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was pretty good...i got a laugh out of it...i think that u need to write more poems like this..
    Good Job and keep writing
    ~Caotic~
    | Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
      This was really funny. I think I expected crap after the title, but was pleasently pleased by the actual content. Well done.. Hilarious!!!!
    | Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by manicsmuse | [ Reply to This ]


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