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Everything I Have Gone Through

Author: RequiemOfDreams
ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 97 /140 /38
Words: 62
Class/Type: Poetry /Satire
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Everything I Have Gone Through

I've wrote of paths
Spoken of roads
Imagined forks
Envisioned truths
Realized falicies
Invoked feelings
Revoked happiness
Learnt deadends
And through it all I thought about what I would say
After counting on destiny to bring me all the way
And for all the distance I have travelled
I have but a single idea, I have unravelled

Fuck the po-leece

Submitted on 2006-08-22 03:57:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this was pretty good...i got a laugh out of it...i think that u need to write more poems like this..
Good Job and keep writing
| Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
  This was really funny. I think I expected crap after the title, but was pleasently pleased by the actual content. Well done.. Hilarious!!!!
| Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by manicsmuse | [ Reply to This ]

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