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    Author: sickly
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 545/537/203
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    could you dream that you die in the silence?
    then hang 'em high
    realign the silhouette in time
    disconnected from the pain of nothing
    so young with the obsessions of a filmstar
    there's no time for us to slip away
    heartache to heartache at midnight
    needing a drink and a quick decision
    to play the devil asa reason
    broke down through all of yesterday
    a pityful shame vicious game
    with music as my only friend
    my other ways out of the blazes
    i'm the one and only survivor
    enough of stilled loves' blame
    in a deep purple endreamening
    make believe that you touched freedom
    lies to the eyes that hope wishfully
    too much to hold down forever
    my very own unsellable soul




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