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Author: sickly
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could you dream that you die in the silence?
then hang 'em high
realign the silhouette in time
disconnected from the pain of nothing
so young with the obsessions of a filmstar
there's no time for us to slip away
heartache to heartache at midnight
needing a drink and a quick decision
to play the devil asa reason
broke down through all of yesterday
a pityful shame vicious game
with music as my only friend
my other ways out of the blazes
i'm the one and only survivor
enough of stilled loves' blame
in a deep purple endreamening
make believe that you touched freedom
lies to the eyes that hope wishfully
too much to hold down forever
my very own unsellable soul




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