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Escape from reality


Author: PiperH
ASL Info:    17, F, Georgia
Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 253 /299 /172
Words: 148
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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I've always loved this poem. I still consider it to be one of my best. Now that I look back on it, it reminds me of my mom and all those pills she used to take.
I wonder if subconsciously, I was writing this about her.


Escape from reality



I am perfectly happy
in my own little world
trapped inside my mind
it's a beautiful place
for me it's heaven
and I stay there all the time
on the outside
it's not the same
everyone thinks I've gone insane
if only they could know
if only they could see
that I'm no longer in pain
it may look that way
from your point of view
but definitely not from mine
it may seem that I am crazy
but really, I am fine
it's like I took
a very long vacation
but this time I will not return
you can live without me
you don't need me anymore
that's something you'll have to learn
so in my little world
that I've created
I'll live the rest of my life
no one can get me back
and certainly not you
so please don't even try




Submitted on 2006-08-22 17:20:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Piper
I Like this
I LIKE THIS A LOT!!!
I can easilly relate
It is possible to live in this world though without being insane
I always look for the positive to every negative and let that positive carry me to happiness
It is true that every negative has a positive we just have to search at the root of the problem and find it
Again this is worded very well and I too have always looked for this reality
It wasnt until like 2 years ago that I realized it is possible for one to create their own reality without being crazy
I am a living breathing example to that
Please remain positive
I Promise you with a clean clear conscience and a positive attitude you will find the Reality you are looking for
God Bless
Your Friend
Ron
| Posted on 2006-08-22 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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