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    dots Submission Name: Meanstreakdots
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    Author: heartofxwinterx
    ASL Info:    14 f paradise
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 85/67/39
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 692
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 756



    Description:
       Eh, not that great, but it was just going through my head.


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    dotsMeanstreakdots
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    In my heart is a meanstreak.
    And its beginning to make me weak.
    I'm hurting the ones I love with words.
    Insults, and mean things is all thats heard.

    I don't know why I am so mean.
    It makes me unhappy and unclean.
    I feel bad and dirty when I hurt.
    I know they feel bad, but I feel like dirt.

    My meanstreak is more like a meansea.
    Hurtfulnes and meaness comsume me.
    I swear I try to act loving and nice.
    To be sugar coated instead of spice.

    But it never works, I'm still this way.
    Meaner and meaner everyday.
    My heart is being taken over by this meanstreak.
    And I swear I lose everyone in less than a week.




    Submitted on 2006-08-23 01:14:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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