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    dots Submission Name: The Road Less Takendots

    Author: musicgurl
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 1/1/6
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This poem is about not following the crowd and standing up for what u know is right and true even if all your friends are against it. The poem also says how its hard to do, but it is standing up for what u believe and its important to do that.

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    dotsThe Road Less Takendots

    One day I was awaken
    Lying alone on the road less taken
    To shouts and screams
    Of those who were less than they seemed
    The people I once knew so well
    Following the crowd so they would excel
    Leaving me behind to stand up for whats true
    They hoped I would follow too
    But I refused and stood up for whats right
    Even if it took all of my might
    Cause I know what I believe is the truth
    And its what needs to be taught to the youth
    Even if I'm awaken,
    By the shouts and screams,
    Lying alone on the road less taken.

    Submitted on 2006-08-23 15:00:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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