Although no one has noticed, this write was very bold and courageous. On a site full of sad stories and hard times You were bold enough express your happiness and faith in God, and for that I really am impress, infact this is probably the first christian write I have encountered on here and to add it happens to be wonderful. It's almost like another side to poetry, an happier side.
I think this is just overall about you, and how you feel about the days passing in your life spiritually, emotionally and physically. It is, in my opinion, wonderfully written. THis is excellent and makes me want to read more of the stuff that you have written, which I will do at a later date. Excellent write. ~CAotic~
religion? that person below me is wrong, this is about Christianalty and battles with yourself. Great poem here. A sinner always creeps within our souls and like the Bible talks about, if you rid the spirit that made you bad, seven more shall enter if you do not be careful lol So, tell your friends to never get you mad lol and being honest, your mother would be happy for you at this moment. she is happier now in Heaven then anyother spot on earth. Her and jesus are sipping tea and talking about plans for the new Heaven and earth right now, Shouting in Glory " It is almost time for everyone to rejoyce!!" love you daughter always peace and continue the sucess and the blessings you bringing
personally i think that this almost fits under religeon. i mean, i think it is great when people find thier faith helps them day in, day out to help them become better people. im not really a god person. i have a diferent faith, that relies on the nature of my suroundings. the first two stanza's were great, and really began to describe you, but the last three began to less and less. that is my personal finding in this piece, but thats because i am quite analytical, and perhaps bias against religeon. hope this hasnt upset you in any way.