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I'm Not Even That Sensitive...


Author: mrmundane
ASL Info:    20/m/vancouver bc
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 47 /96 /78
Words: 116
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Average Vote:    4.0000
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I'm Not Even That Sensitive...



What does it matter
All people are fake.
And shit on you with every stride they take.
Wearing me thin to the breaking end of my inexhaustible constitution
Which has lost all it's strength over these years of consistant exclusion
I want to be mad but there's nothing to be mad at...
...what's the point of being the only one that gives a damn...
... about more than what makes up who i am...

... reality seems to have been stolen by evil.

... duality is a great description of people.
upfront, if they are nice, they end up the most evil.

what kind of world is this...
i hate you fucking people.




Submitted on 2006-08-24 04:10:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like this poem... it has feeling to it... very well writen and in a form am not quite sure of... but i like it.. it's a form i've never seen.. it's original... it's creative... keep it up...
| Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by ULA | [ Reply to This ]


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