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    dots Submission Name: capturedots
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    Author: elohimswork
    ASL Info:    30/M/Chi
    Elite Ratio:    4.54 - 76/96/39
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotscapturedots
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    capture...
    the pleasantry's of a moment

    capture...
    the beauty of simplicity

    capture...
    passion in romances net

    capture...
    the captions of your life

    capture...
    your anger &
    spoil yourself
    with calm

    capture...
    imtamacy imtamately

    capture...
    the first time.

    capture...
    stillness
    peace
    & silence

    capture...
    oneness
    with god

    capture...
    the raptures
    of life

    a life
    well lived is
    well captured...




    4 finger & a pen poetry...










    Submitted on 2006-08-24 14:07:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Your poem, my comment.
    After using it in my own peices,
    i got very much sick of
    repitition.
    although, the message is real clear, "live life to its fullest"? am i far off?
    definitly took something from it tho.
    "capture...
    your anger &
    spoil yourself
    with calm"
    I love these lines.
    buuuut keep these out of poety at all times
    &&&&&&&
    | Posted on 2006-08-28 00:00:00 | by Drayke | [ Reply to This ]
      Baby...you spelled the title wrong....slow down now...Slllllow down.

    This was something that many will need to read. Not many decide that they can actually capture so much. They don't know how to. Not as if it's really all that hard. I think capturing a butterfly would be more difficult then capturing your own life.

    But......many get lost down many paths never wanting to stop and pay attention to the main beauty along the course.....themself.

    You went all inspirational on this one.

    Loved it.

    Li
    | Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      Capture
    this well thought out poem my friend.
    a few typo's but apart from that very good indeed. Colin
    | Posted on 2006-08-24 00:00:00 | by Colin Douglas | [ Reply to This ]



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