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    dots Submission Name: If This is Love....dots
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    Author: Evonna Findley
    ASL Info:    16/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 77/33/27
    Words: 283
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 148
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       I've learned the hard way that sometimes the line between love and lust is so blurred it's hard to tell which is which


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    dotsIf This is Love....dots
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    we walked into the room it was too dark to see anything

    but that didn't really make a difference for us

    all we needed was to feel,

    to feel each other

    to feel the passion

    "is this love?"

    "baby, i don't know, but don't ask questions just go with it"

    we slid along the outside of the room trying to avoid the crowd, they
    were everywhere,

    but we hardly noticed,

    i hardly noticed,

    all i could comprehend was his hand touching mine

    the way it felt so strong

    like he'd never let me go

    it was something beautiful

    me and him together.

    "hey kid you're crazy you know that?'

    "yeah i wish i could say this' just how i am
    but i know it's really just you that's making me this way,
    you've got me all messed up inside........do you think this' love?"

    i couldn't even answer

    my mouth wouldn't work

    what did it matter if this was real love,

    it sure felt like it

    i didn't want to tell him the truth though

    that i didn't know

    if this was just a feeling

    a chemical process in our brains

    all those horomones making us crazy

    making us in love

    or if it was something more

    but what did it matter?

    "baby i think this' love"





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    ||| Comments |||
      This teaches a great lesson! I've seen this picture in my mind and i've seen it a thousand times. In the teenage years, love means something different to girls than it does to most boys! Gotta be careful of some Don Juan or Ricco Suave acting like he'll stay with you forever just to get what he wants. I think the trick is not to give into lust. At least not too quickly, and that's one way of finding out if that person likes you just for you or if it's only those beautiful eyes, that flowing red hair, sexy physique, luscious lips, and nice cleavage that's powering his intensions!


    that was me rambling! sorry if it's too much! lol


    thx,

    ~bigrig0625~


    | Posted on 2006-08-31 00:00:00 | by bigrig0625 | [ Reply to This ]
      Awwww.... so cute to see people in love or at least in a caring way holding hands in a crowd... people are scared of that now a days... some grammar errors that didn't mess with the feel of the write so that was good... and it worked like a movie on my head just scene after scene... just such a cute thing when people are in love or at least seem like it... gives me something to look up to in life... Good write

    Jose J. Ortiz aka Josyman
    | Posted on 2006-08-26 00:00:00 | by josymanthegreat | [ Reply to This ]



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