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    dots Submission Name: a mistake, a moment, but no regretsdots
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    Author: Evonna Findley
    ASL Info:    16/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 77/33/27
    Words: 219
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 156
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1283



    Description:
       is a mistake really a mistake
    when you knew beforehand what would happen
    if you failed?


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    dotsa mistake, a moment, but no regretsdots
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    When does a mistake define a life?
    when you've hit the bottom?
    or when you can't find your way back to the light?
    but is it really even a mistake
    when you knew what would happen if everything went wrong?
    when you still took the chance
    even though you knew it would probably be a dive into the deep end?
    and if that's your choice why should you bother to voice all the things you've got bottled up inside?
    all the tension inside twisting you in two
    should you speak a word of it yourself
    cause the words got lost when you threw all reason to the wind
    and let yourself fly for a moment in time
    of course you knew it wouldn't last cause how long do these things ever last?
    dreams are a flighty thing
    and never last for longer then a moment
    but at the time they seem like they could go on forever
    that's the only reason they can trick people into living them
    cause in that brief moment they feel like they feel like they're on top of the world
    that nothing could eve bring them down
    and then they fly too high
    hoping to catch a glimpse of the sun
    but it only ends with it melting their wax wings




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      Everyone makes mistakes. The trick is to try and learn from them and prevent making the same one again. "It is not the falling down.....it is the staying down".

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-09-11 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]



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