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    dots Submission Name: These Wordsdots

    Author: precious_poetry
    ASL Info:    19 F TN
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 137/145/67
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 507
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1005

       This is just some silly thing threw together making fun of some of my friends that think its funny to pick on me because I actually write all my poetry and thoughts on paper, instead of on here. Sure they end up here, but my thoughts visit my notebook first Hope this inspires a few smiles, its not intended to offend anyone.

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    dotsThese Wordsdots

    I accepted this pen,
    Took it into my hand,
    Drew blood from my viens,
    To write with, understand?

    My life is in these words,
    My heart speaks upon this paper.
    These thoughts don't leave me,
    To simply entertain then taper.

    Speak how you will,
    About my rhyming works,
    Just don't expect me to care,
    I won't cry for you jerks.

    Keep your filth where it belongs,
    In the depths of your icy heart.
    If I want to talk to an asshole,
    I'll simply Fart.

    Pardon my temper,
    Its had enough as well.
    All you cruel people,
    Can go to hell.

    Forgive me once more,
    For my creativity flows,
    I can't stop what it says,
    So now you all know.

    Whether they are good or bad,
    I love all that I write,
    I don't care if you don't like them,
    For these words are my life.

    Submitted on 2006-08-25 00:45:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very Funny! I enjoyed the rhyming way the words flowed and your ability to say .. or rather write whatever comes to mind.
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem alot It gets what you have to say out and it really expresses your inside feelings have you been writing a while? It made me think that you wrote this when something bad just happened or you were sad or upset.

    | Posted on 2006-08-31 00:00:00 | by inlove2009 | [ Reply to This ]
      youre opening was your bottom line. it took me in, it in itself has enough behind it to go the distance.
    i read the poem but remembered the opening.
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by blackhart | [ Reply to This ]

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