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Submission Name: acid butterfly dots

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Author:	blu_kittin
ASL Info:	20/F/Garden of Eden
Elite Ratio:	6.15 - 711/397/207
Words:	67

Class/Type:	Poetry/Comedy
Total Views:	679
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	501

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acid butterfly dots

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purples, pinks
such a minx
aquamarine
you're so mean
thought you would stay to play
but instead you flew away
brightest blue
i want you
so delicate
caught in a little net
reddest rose
lands on my nose
orange and electric lime
c'mon its play time
butter yellow
oh so mellow
swirly whirly
some are pearly
swimming in a tye dye field
ma and my psycadelic shield

Submitted on 2006-08-25 14:55:58 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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lol it was really creative.

good write

Fana
| Posted on 2006-08-30 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
i love the title for this, and the flow is great. awesome imagery on this one hun. keep writing :)
| Posted on 2006-09-01 00:00:00 | by Jenni Bean | [ Reply to This ]

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