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3 Word Poem


Author: His goth child
ASL Info:    15/male/Loserville
Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 82 /79 /45
Words: 3
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Description:


ok george dont kill me but i think ive done it..
ok i think this is the best way to write such a small poem because this relates to all people and all poems.


3 Word Poem



All For You




Submitted on 2006-08-25 16:23:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  All For You....

And....????

Anyone could write a poem like this.
you cant call this a poem.

Good start though, so go from there.
thats how i would teach myself, making titles first and letting my stories come to life from there.

necrotic
| Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by necrotic | [ Reply to This ]
  *punches fist into wall* damn it why hadn't I thought of this? oh yea, because it says too much in saying relativly nothing.....in a personal sense anyway, you could have 100 people read this and get at least a 100 different meanings and ideas about it. personally even just thinking about it me and all my split personalities come up with a lot of meanings and they all seem way too lengthy for a comment about a threeword write;P so yea what to say about this? it wasn't so much that you had a lot of 'skill' or anything...or even lack there of for that matter, it's just....you left the most amazing things unsaid and I really liked that....oh and hun I Feel I must add, contrary to what he wants everyone to believe, George couldn't kill anyone <3 :)
| Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
  Interesting...

and on the same lines one could also post

"All About Me"

or something similar.

Very profound lol

| Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
  I can get this. In a very deep sense.

All for you.

For all poets would be whether they're throwing their whole selves into a love poem. An anger poem, something like that. It's ALL FOR YOU: that person that's inspired that emotion.

Then there's the poem that gets the hurt out, and that's ALL FOR YOU: the poet just to get some depression out. I don't know

Maybe I'm looking into 3 words too deep? Eh?

BCute
| Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]


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