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    dots Submission Name: Misunderstandingdots
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    Author: Leala
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 245/299/70
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 156
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I wrote this for a friend. A recent occurence prompted this poem. It is purposely vague. But this fits her life right now... and so many others. I hope you repect this peace.. and maybe gain some insight.


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    She confided in someone...
    her trust was broken again.

    How does she deal with a world
    where so many misunderstand?

    Judgments will forever
    rain down upon her head;
    from the small-minded,
    from the confused,
    from the good-intentioned.

    How does she deal with a world
    where so many misunderstand?

    We all want to live our lives
    why does she have to be different?
    We all want to be loved,
    why is she denied?

    How does she deal with a world
    where so many misunderstand?

    Times and laws,
    people and places;
    change through time.
    Hatred and scorn,
    judgment and discrimination;
    stay the same.

    How do we create a world
    where so many misunderstand?




    Submitted on 2006-08-25 17:23:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Mmm reading this I wonder why noone has commented on it. Sure it's vague, but some of the greatest poet's poems are. I esspecially love the third stanza bacause i think no matter who you are you have at some point endured judgements from others. Sometimes it feels like rain... other times not. Very well stated, my friend! --ps if you weren't sure, that's my way of not prodding to what spurred this poem, for which I know you will thank me ; )
    | Posted on 2006-09-12 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]



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