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Heart Lies

Author: od9.1.04
ASL Info:    15/f/oh
Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 18 /38 /19
Words: 170
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
Total Views: 1145
Average Vote:    5.0000
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Heart Lies

I don't want you today.
I don't want you tomorrow.
Why did you stay..
When you saw you were my sorrow?

I dont' want you now.
I didn't want you then.
You never showed me how..
It could of been.

I don't want your lies.
I don't want this mess.
No more nights I'll cry...
About all my weighted stress.

I don't want to move on.
I don't want someone new.
I'll regret it when your gone...
It'll hurt to be without you.

I don't want you.
I don't want you to leave.
My heart isn't telling what's true...
It's breaking piece by piece.

I don't want you to see.
I don't want you to know.
Then you might want to leave...
What my heart can't show.

I want to have love to share.
I want to have someone with who I can be.
To have someone who cares...
Someone to be with forever happily.

Submitted on 2006-08-25 19:14:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  that was such a touching piece to read. i understand it when your heart lies, and you regret what you left behind. thanx for sharin, it is helpin me.
| Posted on 2006-08-26 00:00:00 | by Ali Marie | [ Reply to This ]
  this is really good. you did a good job on it. very emotional. Joanna
| Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
  this is very original
and well written
| Posted on 2006-08-26 00:00:00 | by Evonna Findley | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, that's... Really *really* good. I'm adding it to my favorites! I loved it! Good job!
| Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by Pabapfc | [ Reply to This ]

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