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    dots Submission Name: Tranquil Reflecting Pooldots

    Author: smartblond
    ASL Info:    18/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 97/114/33
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       this a free verse i wrote for school

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    dotsTranquil Reflecting Pooldots

    A tranquil reflecting pool
    Resting in a gentle breezy meadow of delight
    Luscious grass waves in the wind

    The cheerful sun shines bright
    The deer grazelazily upon the sweet grass
    That grows abundant
    Birds fly through the air

    Flowers nod their dainty heads
    in sweet union with the earth
    Joyful rabbits hop about
    Tiny, little field mice scurry back and forth

    Croaking spotted frogs sit
    On their floating lily pads
    Fluttering humming birds beat papery wings
    They all live in perfect harmony
    By the tranquil reflecting pool

    Submitted on 2006-08-25 19:22:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Don't tell anyone where it is or they'll try to buy and turn it into a tourist attraction with a twenty acre parking lot.

    This is a very relaxing piece that makes me feel like forgetting work. Thank you for sharing, and have more thoughts like this.
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by coyote | [ Reply to This ]
    This was so pretty :D I have a bad headache, but honestly, such a beautiful picture can make them this disappear. Thank you so much.
    | Posted on 2006-08-25 00:00:00 | by fiery whisper | [ Reply to This ]

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