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Why be sad when happiness holds hope i'd rather smile than frown and mope i'd rather laugh than cry a lake just let me learn from my mistakes time won't stop so just move on because who wants to stay sad for way too long? we all have bad times and we all should just keep on thinking about all the good |
at least u found a title that fits for once. lol. this one was ok and i liked the message u were trying to convey. i think u should just strive to be deeper. but sometimes a blunt poem is the best kind. but usually u don't wanna hit the reader over the head with the message. holla!!!| Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | |