Description: lol idk Bridget inspired this poem. So did idk me thinking about life. I mean shit life is too short to be sad forever. At least for more than two days.
Why be sad
when happiness holds hope
i'd rather smile
than frown and mope
i'd rather laugh
than cry a lake
just let me learn
from my mistakes
time won't stop
so just move on
because who wants to stay sad
for way too long?
we all have bad times
and we all should
just keep on thinking
about all the good
at least u found a title that fits for once. lol. this one was ok and i liked the message u were trying to convey. i think u should just strive to be deeper. but sometimes a blunt poem is the best kind. but usually u don't wanna hit the reader over the head with the message. holla!!!
Submission Name: uplifting poem
