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    dots Submission Name: uplifting poemdots

    Author: Poeticprincess
    ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333/325/104
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       lol idk Bridget inspired this poem. So did idk me thinking about life. I mean shit life is too short to be sad forever. At least for more than two days.

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    dotsuplifting poemdots

    Why be sad
    when happiness holds hope
    i'd rather smile
    than frown and mope
    i'd rather laugh
    than cry a lake
    just let me learn
    from my mistakes
    time won't stop
    so just move on
    because who wants to stay sad
    for way too long?
    we all have bad times
    and we all should
    just keep on thinking
    about all the good

    Submitted on 2006-08-26 00:39:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      at least u found a title that fits for once. lol. this one was ok and i liked the message u were trying to convey. i think u should just strive to be deeper. but sometimes a blunt poem is the best kind. but usually u don't wanna hit the reader over the head with the message. holla!!!
    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

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