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Don't have Time


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 67
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Description:


umm the point should be obvious


Don't have Time



I have no time for bullshit
my life would be better with out it
why should i worry if you..
if you like me...
love me?
I don't because
i
don't
have time
to sit around
i
don't
have time
to wait for your call
i
don't
have
the time to waiste
on
worrying about you
why?
because i need to
worry about me




Submitted on 2006-08-26 00:42:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i liked the last part. it's good that ur such a strong independent female. and so young too. lol. i'm only like a couple of years older than u. i'm glad ur posting cuz none of the other hip hop heads on this site are doing anything
| Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  good job. nothing more to say...and yes the point is very obvious. most people can probably relate to this....good job again. keep writing...
~Caotic~
| Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
  the message in this is good. alot of people I know have this same [censored] goin down. but I think I"m not good enough at reading poetry to know how this is supposed to flow..

but still, this is good.
| Posted on 2006-09-05 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]


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