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    dots Submission Name: Don't have Timedots
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    Author: Poeticprincess
    ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333/325/104
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 950
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 475



    Description:
       umm the point should be obvious


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    dotsDon't have Timedots
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    I have no time for bullshit
    my life would be better with out it
    why should i worry if you..
    if you like me...
    love me?
    I don't because
    i
    don't
    have time
    to sit around
    i
    don't
    have time
    to wait for your call
    i
    don't
    have
    the time to waiste
    on
    worrying about you
    why?
    because i need to
    worry about me




    Submitted on 2006-08-26 00:42:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i liked the last part. it's good that ur such a strong independent female. and so young too. lol. i'm only like a couple of years older than u. i'm glad ur posting cuz none of the other hip hop heads on this site are doing anything
    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      good job. nothing more to say...and yes the point is very obvious. most people can probably relate to this....good job again. keep writing...
    ~Caotic~
    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
      the message in this is good. alot of people I know have this same [censored] goin down. but I think I"m not good enough at reading poetry to know how this is supposed to flow..

    but still, this is good.
    | Posted on 2006-09-05 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]


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