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    dots Submission Name: ?Does he?dots
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    Author: AfricanPrincess
    ASL Info:    21/F/SA
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 222/201/31
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Misc
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    dots?Does he?dots
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    there comes this defining moment in each ones life when we can honestly answer the question "Does he love me?" and get a reply by a mere gesture of absence or presence of him at that moment.....




    Submitted on 2006-08-26 13:05:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is interesting. Not a lot of words, but I tihnk that it speaks to all of us and gives us hope of someday love passing through our doors. Good job and I hope you continue to write.
    ~Caotic~
    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]


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