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    dots Submission Name: Destroying Poetrydots

    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 10/192/232
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsDestroying Poetrydots

    I deleted it
    Burnt it
    Ripped it up
    Abandoned it
    Stopped it
    Given it up

    It means nothing to me

    Itís all words
    And numbers
    Words and numbers
    Itís all letters
    And figures
    Letters and figures
    Itís all notes
    And music
    Notes and music

    It means nothing to me

    Itís all ripped
    And torn up
    A million pieces
    Into Cyberspace

    It means nothing to me

    I want it to stop
    This voice in my head
    Your voice in my head
    I want it to stop

    You mean nothing to me

    I ripped you up
    Burnt you
    Into a million pieces
    Abandoned you
    Stopped it
    Given you up

    It all means nothing.
    Nothing at all.

    Submitted on 2006-08-26 17:29:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very interresting, i felt the sense of disaray you put forthe in this piece.
    Well written.
    But at the same time simple.
    Write on.
    | Posted on 2006-08-26 00:00:00 | by Valle_Siddious | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this ha dlike unlimited amount of depth in in wow.
    i really have nothing else to say but this is one of the nicest work i have seen in a while.
    i liked how you started it and ended it a little different.

    kool write

    i can relate

    | Posted on 2006-08-26 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]

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