War Returns! by Trufflepiggy

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Author:	Trufflepiggy
ASL Info:	20something/Fe/USA
Elite Ratio:	6.11 - 63/47/14
Words:	191

Class/Type:	Poetry/Comedy
Total Views:	113
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Bytes:	1312

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For the few of you who know the back-and-forth rant that's been going on between me and the user Crow, enjoy my next rebuttal!!

For the majority of people who are hangin' in the wind with nair a clue, this WHOOOOLE thing began when Crow put a little picture up on her main page saying something to the effect of "K is for Kate who got hit with an axe." (It should still be there) I went into a state of mock-horror and wrote "Last Moments" (For Pete's sake, bash it it's terribly written :P) SHE then responded with "War!" and NOW this is my second time around posting THIS one.
*gasp* It's convoluted I know, but fun nontheless!

War Returns! dots

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I declare it as emergency!
I've set the code to RED.
There's no telling what I'll wage
Until I've got your head!!

A simple rhyme was all it took
to get my comrad riled;
Behind my back, unknownst to me,
She plotted for a while

Then one day she broke the wall!
Out poured her vengeful fued!
The game is on, the pieces set
So NOW what can I do?

Shall I resign to dagger quills?
Or just a poison marker?
RoseArt scissors could be nice,
But I'll need something darker!

3-ton inkwells raging doom
Upon her scrappy paper!
Mutant pencils! Twisted pens!
They'll bind her in a caper!

So tempting is the thought of war;
To rain down quick desctruction!
But I can't storm out as of yet
It could end it abduction

This must be better than the last
I admit to loss! I fumbled!
No more, my friend, NO MORE I SAY!
THIS time, it's YOU who'll stumble!

Make your defense, Crow, make it well
Trufflepiggy's coming!
Mark my words, I WILL ruturn...
Just listen for the drumming

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  Ah! Piggs this had me in stitches for ages!
Very funny indeed. Is there any chance of peace between you two peeps or is it war for eternity?! Colin.
| Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by Colin Douglas | [ Reply to This ]
  all your writes are SO entertaining! this war is extremely clever. good points and counter-points :) keep it up!
| Posted on 2006-08-28 00:00:00 | by GorgeousCorpse | [ Reply to This ]
  "It could end [in?] abduction" possibly a typo?

Echoing the current Amercan sentiments of imperialism? Fighting the sword with the pen. I dig the lymeric quality of the piece. It has a nursery rhyme quality, yet as i understood it, it is poignant commentary on the wars we are currently waging in the "adult" world.

enjoyable indeed.

maybe you could write the juxtaposition: a very serious prose dealing with the most youthful of circumstances.
| Posted on 2006-08-28 00:00:00 | by googie | [ Reply to This ]

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