Description: This poem is how I feel about Mylo I found out he is moving to the states and I just needed someone to hear what I have to say hope you like it
A dream come true
Is all I have
Left of you
These tears sting my eyes
Who's going to be here for me
And show they care
Without you here I have fears
Need strength to conquer
What I feel
What I feel is this girls beat
The broken sound of a heartbeat
But no need to worry
Cuz while your gone I'll carry on
Live my life the way it was
Hopefully without you here
I don't go running scared
You really express your sense of loss well. Writing about emotion is so commonplace nowadays that it is ealily faked. It is good to see a piece that is so sincere. I like the title tie in also. When it is viewed with the last line I think it adds dimension to your poem.