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    dots Submission Name: Men Are Admirabledots
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    Author: Chihuahuii
    ASL Info:    16/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 75/90/36
    Words: 211
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       I've been very adamant lately about my beliefs that men are dogs. People are even starting to think I'm a lesbian. So, on the plane, I thought about what I LIKE about guys. And here it is.


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    dotsMen Are Admirabledots
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    Men are admirable.
    Not because they can write their names with their piss, but
    They can't take no for an answer and that takes
    Courage, for most, and while I can say I like to be alone
    They can't take no for an answer they push the relationship
    Like the weedman pushed down your throat
    Like a man shoves himself into an unsuspecting
    HE FORGETS her name when
    She tries to be too nice too early and
    I FORGET his name when
    I block out his hum with a snarly hip-hop beat and
    I think and I think that poetry is sexy
    And sex is just physical love
    What I write is a wish to be close to you
    Close like best friends like When can I see you again? like
    God man I just wanna tell you how much I
    Love is more than physical and
    Men are more than just dogs and
    They can't take no for an ANSWER
    They can't take NO for an answer
    They can't TAKE no for an answer
    Dangerous and admirable
    Men are admirable
    And I hate and I love that you can't take no for an answer.
    Every woman needs love but not from
    Every man should learn that
    NO IS AN ANSWER.




    Submitted on 2006-08-27 13:40:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Freaking dang straight every man should take no for an answer. This piece flowed in a good way, in a different way, but a good way. You could sense the hurt and confusion. You made a very strong point and backed it up with emotions. Men SHOULD take no for an answer. No matter what the question is.

    BCute<3
    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]


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