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    dots Submission Name: Clairvoyancedots
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    Author: Chihuahuii
    ASL Info:    16/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 75/90/36
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 185
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       Poetry, prediction, apocalypse. There's more to prejudice than meets the eye.


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    dotsClairvoyancedots
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    I write about
    The right to doubt
    The only boundaries between
    You and me
    Take the forms of color, sex and greed.

    Read and die.
    I’m seeing in my mind’s eye
    The base degrees of prejudice
    Launching to the upmost round
    Our seven deadly sins.
    Gluttony secedes the quest for reputation
    And coats the heart with cold undying
    Power, scorn the ladder
    On which before the clouds we stood.

    Shakespeare didn’t know it,
    But society shows it.

    The seven deadly sins like the wonders of the world
    Shimmer, flecks in the eyes
    Of youthful clairvoyance.
    Poetry, prediction, apocalypse,
    Evolution, education
    Induce intoxication, like the ebb and flow
    Of zeroes and heroes and all in between,
    The more you know, the higher you go,
    And the less you can show for it.

    Poetry, prediction, apocalypse.
    T’is abuse of greatness when it disjoins
    Remorse from power.
    A common American thing.
    All-American All-Star Fling, and
    It’s a funny thing, there are as many sins
    As there are classics
    In our world of envy, lust, anger,
    Porn and celebrity magazines
    Are all we have to show for our
    Babylon of Knowledge.

    Poetry, prediction, apocalypse.
    To our chagrin, Voltaire speaks the truth:
    “A witty saying proves nothing.”




    Submitted on 2006-08-27 13:50:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You write beyond your years. I'm not condemning young writers at all. But, the young writers on this site never, ever cease to amaze me with their vocabulary use and the flow of the poems. The depths at which you all write. Sometimes I just...shake my head in awe. You all are awesome.

    This piece had no exception. You used quotes, representations. It was so superb. The word usage....agh. I've always been a big vocab. person.

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    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]



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