I really admire people that can rhyme. I can't. You have summed what a poet is and why. We write so we don't "come in two", "go insane" - it is what we need. I like the format of this one too. The format is very simple, the rhyming is great, the message is clear - another one of your works that I would say needs no changes in any way. I know we're supposed to suggest improvements, but if it doesn't need any, I'm not suggesting any.