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    dots Submission Name: I KNOW A PLACEdots
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    Author: bigrig0625
    ASL Info:    34 M Tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 40/73/19
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 406
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 532



    Description:
       A search for better days!


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    dotsI KNOW A PLACEdots
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    I know a place
    I'd like to go

    It's in my mind
    It's in my soul

    A place of happiness
    That knows no fear

    I just can't find it
    But I know it's here

    I've searched all over
    High and low

    But where it is
    I do not know

    So look within
    My weary head

    I cannot find it
    Is it dead?


    bigrig0625








    Submitted on 2006-08-27 16:03:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice and melodic tempo. I like the resonated feel of it as it flows from one part to the next.

    Happy places huh, well.... I think we all know of some, whether real or unreal. Just because we can't find it doesn't mean it's dead.

    Keep looking BR!
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by danativ | [ Reply to This ]
      i can so relate. its awsome and the right length and yeahhh.



    good luck in finding ur happy place. cuz its there it just hard to find sometimes...

    Da Grim Reaperessss
    | Posted on 2006-10-31 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
      wow i can relat ethe only good place for me is my imagination. their is no place where everything is perfect lol. i reall liked the poem it really ment alot i am putting it in my favorites.

    keep it up.

    Fana
    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      neat rhyming...though you could've expanded it...good work. keep writing.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2006-08-27 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]



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